Record of Observation or Review of Teaching Practice Observed by Tutor
Session/artefact to be observed/reviewed: 1:2:1 Study Skills Tutorial
Size of student group: 1
Observer: Tim Stephens
Observee: Fran Barry
Note: This record is solely for exchanging developmental feedback between colleagues. Its reflective aspect informs PgCert and Fellowship assessment, but it is not an official evaluation of teaching and is not intended for other internal or legal applications such as probation or disciplinary action.
Part One
Observee to complete in brief and send to observer prior to the observation or review:
What is the context of this session/artefact within the curriculum?
The session is one of a weekly 1:2:1 study skills tutorial. The sessions are usually face to face but we also have online sessions. This session is face to face.
How long have you been working with this group and in what capacity?
I have been working with this student since the beginning of this academic year. She is a 3rd year Fine Arts BA student.
What are the intended or expected learning outcomes?
At the first session an Individual Learning Plan (ILP) is agreed as part of the learning contract. A key issue that we focus on is time management and organizing workload. The student struggled a lot with writing her dissertation. She completed lots of research but found it hard to plan and structure the written work. Feedback from course tutors often added to her anxiety as she did not always understand what she needed to do. We spend a lot of time brainstorming ideas, discussing how to apply theory to her case studies and to give context so the ideas she was putting forward were easier to frame.
She is currently focusing more on her practical work and is more confident with this aspect of the course. However, she is keen to keep working at improving her writing skills, especially when putting together her portfolio and artist’s statement.
Time management is also a concern, so the weekly sessions help her to keep focussed on all the different elements of her work.
What are the anticipated outputs (anything students will make/do)?
This particular lesson will focus on a review of the weekly planning grid we agreed last week. Progress towards plans for the open studio day in March and her artist’s statement will also be reviewed and refocused if needs be.
Are there potential difficulties or specific areas of concern?
The student already has a number of competing priorities and had a busy week planned so there may be some slippage with her weekly goals so hopefully this tutorial will not add to her anxiety if this becomes more obvious as we go through the planning grid.
How will students be informed of the observation/review?
She has already been informed and is happy for the observation to take place.
What would you particularly like feedback on?
I am interested to see how well I manage to make the session interactive and not just lead with advice on how to manage her time.
How will feedback be exchanged?
Hopefully via written and verbal means.
Part Two
Observer to note down observations, suggestions and questions:
Key to write up…I tend to write up the observations in a way that allows you to remember the session yourself, so you can reflect on the detail.
Text in “ “ are actual words text in [ ] are my comments or observations.
[You introduce me to the student and make sure she is OK with the observation
“Hows’ your week been…?
St. talks about dissertation grade…
“Would it be useful to go through the feedback…? As it’s on your mind…[You respond immediately to the presenting issue of her concerns… excellent practice, shows your sensitivity
“I will send timesheets…I know it’s a bit of a bore…but you need to accept all..[you aware of professional role
St Yes…I lost my lanyard again….
“Oh..I don’t know…2 questions, re they going to make you pay…? If they’d already found one…can you not pick that one up…? [You are problem solving, very nice
St. They might have thrown it….
Tutorial this afternoon, be talking about folio…[She is nervous or expectant of this afternoon session
“We talked about artists statement, etc [You sum up…about how much research she did..
[You share feedback on screen and read out…there is a lot of detail….”a B+” [actually, it was a B- which may/may not explain her disappointment…Was it wise/best to read the whole thing at once? Could she be providing prompts, could this be co-reading..? See comments..]
“What do you think of the feedback…? [Great open question, much needed at this point
St. I’m trying to connect this with the foley..?
“Anything more specific…you did so much research…they are talking about arguments and we tried to work on that…[You are connecting memory/recall with previous practice/sessions, good practice
St. talks and explains more [She is being very open and honest with you
“I don’t mean to sound patronizing…the grade, it’s a real indication of your work…
“What is it that you want to take from the dissertation…maybe if we go back and discuss the keywords…
St. Of the feedback….? it’s the last bit of the feedback… they quite interesting… for the foley…[she repeats the questions listed at the end of the feedback
“So, let’s go through each question….read out the first question again…
St. recites again the question..
“Have you got an immediate answer to that…[This is a v. good following of an implicit student centred structure; where the curriculum is literally being defined/designed by the student, and your extrapolation
St. Foley is used in film, a technique in cinema..
When we discussed foley, it’s more a technique…used to….the two artworks, you included…[you explain and define foley] used in a much more philosophical way…[This is embarrassing, someone at the door…Don’t worry! Happens to us all!:)]…what did you think when you read it…
St. How is the sound perceived…and shown…[St explained in Aura’a (?) exhibition and trumpets…[She picks up on a key concept for her concerns, see comments..
“This is how I understood it, sound in film and sound in art…work in crit, making one sound in application. Challenges people’s perception of sound…could that be one way…? If you want to explore a key point in the portfolio, thinking of one or two differences…between way sound is used in film and art…I guess you..[You explain in your own words. This is a great technique, of clarifying through reflecting back; a type of sounding board technique…
St. For me it’s preparing for open studios in 2 weeks, this is the sketch and the foley board I showed you…[she then explains in detail about the materials and the sounds and activation processes etc. Problem of the …[Shows effectiveness of that technique perhaps
“Technically you have the details, the sounds, I think its wonderful you’re using the sections of the orchestra…[Authentic teaching and use of self, see comments
St. It’s kind of creating an illusion the sounds are going to be live when they’re not..
“I’m not a technician but how would that work..you’re not playing sounds at them…you’re doing something more interactive …[Very authentic questioning again…
St. No, I’m preprogramming…water with wood wind, stone with percussion…micro phone will have detector…I’m still exploring how it can be activated on the floor…whether they do step out of the box, copper tape…would be. Conductor would activate the sound…if they had to step on [shows book] like here or here…or microphone like a sensor thing that detects movement…[You perhaps anticipated that this would help her articulate her work in preparation for the afternoon presentation
“What is it that you want them to get out of the experience…? [Good directive question
St I did a little bit of writing…I guess its also looking into looking into alarming sounds from everyday….invisible sounds that aren’t really the, but making the sounds visible…playing with the idea of perception playing with the materials…[see comments
“From my perspective…how much time you have….to put this together…it sounds amazing, you said you’ve got 2 weeks…do you how tutorial support, again just thrashing out some ideas…[Professional role and boundary keeping again, well done
St. Finding the material,. The sounds, by Thursday…and seeing how it would function ..this is an idea in development…if for my final degree show…[explains the strategy…for degree show]
within each contained box…is it raw material I keep out, in or put in, a conversation, inside like the box, for example, in the wood like string instruments, like wire or a specific type of wire that reflects that sound…? For example, or the stone, just a stone…going to be something that reflects a conversation….What a foley looks like…[Great listening and space giving for reflection and articulation…pausing, see comments
“Again I keep banging on about context…it sounds amazing…you realize the abstract…do you want them to look at the materials and guess how they are connected to sound…or an example of an instrument…you’re right this is a work-in-progress…you need this by Thursday…what’s the best use of your time and what expertise can you tap into…[Great contribution to connect her up with others, sound intuition. Another route might be further questioning or active reflection, two models, see comments…
“I’m not very useful because it’s not my area of technical expertise..you’ll get some feedback today…[Great point. You don’t need to be self-deprecating. Joking is fine; but aside, are we good enough to be so humble, is something I ask myself…! You clearly are useful, hence the tutorial space as a space for confidence building may be compromised…in the worst case scenario!
St. Yes, everything is a bit rough…it will be simple still struggling with the materials…
“Do you have…the raw materials, giving them enough information to give you feedback as well..is the board going to be lying down…[You’re very good at these directive questions for inquiry
St. No, it will be on the floor…listen to the sounds and see what other people think, I guess it’ll be me asking questions…
“So you have been thinking about some questions…
St. Yes, the ones we are talking about now…
“What were the other questions at the end of the feedback, that one generated quite a bit of discussion on film and art…were there any other…[This is a fantastic intervention and I am so glad you were able to track the structure of the conversation and return to this – wonderful tutoring, well done!
St. reads out another question…
“Ok that sounds…[St. goes on to explain and reflect on your comments
St Just writing that down…the materials and raw materials you can find anywhere…some of the sounds I’m interested in are alarming sounds..a few people I want to get into contact is…foley studio up north where they record Peppa pig’s sounds…the one’s where they create explosions…
“Which resonates more with your work then peppa pig, which I remember was quite alarming…[Great joke – well; I liked it! This is where authenticity also works by keeping us real, or grounded, whether or not the student notices…]
St A few people..get a day or a few days to go there, and meet the people .I would need to write them an email or ring them up…
“North of London, England..
St and then what do these visualization of sound do differently [reads last question]
“You create a lovely pause. [This last for about 20-30 seconds! Which is very long in the tutorial-teaching world. Well done you!]
St. I guess I was thinking, do I go to a shop and buy it, or go out of London and take more time…
“If we think about Thursday that’s your first deadline…[Role; boundary setting
St by Thursday I’m just building the board
“Do you think you could get a visit to studio by the 19th
St No.
“You’ve got your recording or at least a snippet…you want the material… to be representative, stone, water..when you say go to a shop, were you thinking of instruments…?
St done some experiments with salt…and everyday materials..
“Well that can be a question. I don’t feel I’ve been very helpful this session…[! See comments] how you see people connecting with the piece…or experience the sound without giving much direction…
St. I guess its for them to experience the sound yes. With the speakers, more a function of how they perceive the sound….are they near the installation of further way or someone activates…
“Do you know where it is…[You go on to raise the very important question of site specificity
St. i’m trying to show it in the street [You both discuss the sound and acoustics]
“Today… I just want to recap …today the different steps…talk through what you have …will one of the questions be the materials…doesn’t sound as complication as the technical aspects…I guess it might fall into place..[Again very professional tutor role-technique
St the materiality of the objects inside…
“I can almost visualise the board…you know an archaeological or anthropological different materials, that’s what I’m visualizing I my head…[She really listens when you say this I notice. Best element of authenticity, that our imaginations can be involved..?
St I’m just having a hard time reflecting on the materials…and that I want kind of like what are the materials saying or indicating…[Correct problem-finding as one of the key aims of the tutorial
“Is there any elements of your research you can go back…any aspects from them the installations, how they are realized….
ST. I guess its raw materials of everyday life but not aware of the sounds…
“Yep, so maybe having raw material rather than buying…this is a rock piece of metal..looking at the shape what’s it made of…not reflecting on the signs… and the different sounds
St. What, the sounds…[she goes on to share more
“Maybe ask them to imagine what they see when they hear that sound…even that scary piece of research you introduced me too, about court cases…[you explain] difficult how sound can be manipulated as such…hopefully just talking through your ideas is being useful…hopefully…me just being old…and the time it take you …and you were involved in a couple of collaborate pieces. {This turns out to be a very insightful comment just on HOW BUSY she is – indeedJ Made me feel tired just listening to her at this point too!
St. The open studio is more important than other things…what was I going to say…I’m just a bit stuck on this stone, and what like the kind of like materials and the sounds with it…
“Was there anything…the bells, and everyday use, and used in a sinister way, I do remember the discussion there on the everyday…[You share an honest relationship with this student, and have built up a lot of mutual trust; that is excellent work to have invested and gained her trust and confidence
…
“But good luck with today…[Nice, kind intervention!
“One of the collaborations is that with one of your peers..[Continue on a good line, raised earlier…
St No, That is with an MA sound graduate…the sound mirrors in Eastbourne..but I also have an exhibition next week on Thursday..so there’s a bit going on…
“I would spend some time with this graduate though and mull some ideas…[Agree wholeheartedly
St and lots of things she was saying, she told me about this sound theorist…about my other project…that I was working on with my speaker…
“You’ve a lot going on, and so what they connect with each other..
“Are we seeing each other next Tuesday> Hopefully no lurgies’…
“Yes, I’ll go back and read through my notes..
“OK, good luck with it, next week. See you next week.
ST. Ok, thank you, bye.
You bring me back in to say thanks and goodbye too, well hosted and looked after ‘tutorial space’. See Comments.
Session ends.
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Feeback
Firstly, just to say this was a wonderful session and an incredible one to observe. You’ve achieved so much to get a working tutorial relationship to this stage already. It is clearly evident that you have established a deep level of trust between you and the student.
Co-reading; this is a practice -if we think about it – first part of the nature of reading prior to the industrial revolution, but has been used as pedagogic technique in NZ in particular and in the intergenerational adult literacy movement from the 70’s in the UK, which soon spread to schools, or through community schools etc. Think about how co-reading might work in your context maybe.
The students key concept, especially given it is 3rd year realization time, seems to be the differences between appearance of sound-forming-objects and a gap between that and the materiality of sound, to translate a sense of emergency..? I love the way you kept inquiring into the student’s ideation process and ability to articulate it in preparation for her afternoon tutorial and strategically for her writing and contextualization going forward, crits or titles etc.
Authentic teaching and use of self, you are gifted in this capacity. Great tutoring skill. Also part of being good at grounded or down to earth honesty – which often cuts through appearances and gets to the heart of student’s concerns, and allows them to be honest.
Pausing phenomenon – this is a thing, believe it or not in the education literature, partly to explain student’s pauses in language learning and other, but also teacher pauses and uses of silence in dialogue.
Two models for this: Jung’s ‘active imagination’ and Schön reflecting-in-action; try both out for size, see what interests you.
Confidence. We want to inspire confidence in learners and this is done in any number of ways; starting with easy (easier) questions, praise, setting high expectations, positive feedback and feed forward, etc. In this context, you ‘may’ need to be aware of being too self-deprecating; why? well, firstly because you’re doing an absolutely great job of tutoring; secondly, in all power relations we model practices and ways of being, at the same time. Fortunately/unfortunately.
Space for confidence building and the downsides of authenticity…being transparent and honest is not always easy, for ourselves or the students; have a think about ways we might manage this style and approach to student centred practices.
e.g. In authentic teaching, how do we protect students from our own patterns or preferences?
In itself, beginnings and endings are equally important! You managed both. Great achievement. Believe me, Not easy. Well done for this, and in generalJ
Part Three
Observee to reflect on the observer’s comments and describe how they will act on the feedback exchanged:
Overall I m delighted with the feedback. I really was not sure how the tutorial had gone. The comments have made me feel more confident in my tutoring abilities. Sometimes its hard to assess how a lesson has gone and there are lots of very generous comments so thank you. There are also suggestions and ideas that I will explore going forward.
I has a particular lesson in my mind, a follow up from last week but the student had just got her mark and feedback for her dissertation which she had struggled with but worked incredibly hard on. This is what she wanted to spend time on.
I aways encourage students to go through feedback and have found that they are more likely to focus if I offer to read it aloud. I feel I rushed the exercise in this session and this was picked up on. Not sure what co reading is as practice but will investigate further. I have been reflecting more on how we can use feedback to enhance metacognition which is the subject of my third case study.
My student is currently working on her practical piece, as sound installation. This was the theme of her dissertation so we have discussed lots of ideas previously but I am not a technician nor a curator so when she was discussing her installation in detail and asking fro advice I felt ill equipped. Again, this was picked up; my use of humour, perhaps my reiterating too many times that I was no expert, was not very helpful in the circumstances, so I will reflect on this aspect of the feedback.
His comments re authentic teaching are useful. My student was brainstorming ideas on what materials to use and in what form and I think at one stage I got rather carried away with sea sponges and pumice stone (she had been making ceramic sponges that she though could represent stone). Should not have so directive.
I also want to further explore pause phenomenon as there was positive feedback on the use of this pause. I can’t remember why I paused so perhaps I need to explore how the technique can be used in my practice. I’m happy that the level of trust came across. We have been working together since the beginning of the academic year and she rarely misses a session. Even when she was so stressed with the dissertation and had maybe had a difficult conversation with her subject tutor she always came to the tutorial ready to move forward.
She is a remarkable student and I feel privileged to be working with her.